love it. but if i had to fix something.. i would find ways to emphasize what the seller wants to here. put the words like "Cash" " as-is" in caps or bold. put a red circle around your number. create a scene of urgency like "my buyer is looking into buying a property in you neighborhood This month. or This week." and lastly.. have them come back to you if they are not selling like "if you're thinking about selling quickly ,.. or know someone who is.., give me a call" "call me to find out today why now is the best time to sell"i believe that the goal is to get them to call you "TODAY" then you can explain yourself, your business and close them when you give them good phone. but at-least they called you. so have their number.. you can follow up.oh and btw.. the spacing is perfect in the beginning of the letter yet the last few paragraphs are not on the line... its not hand written. if that's the look you are going for.These are just small stuff... like i said before, you're letter is looking great.As always, this is my opinion and i hope it helps. we are not in competition with each other but in collaboration with one another.

Find a heavy hitting agent that does many deals and has a major sense of urgency.

Cant create motivation, but try and convey a sense of urgency in the message.

It has taken me a little over a year to find a partner that has the same sense of urgency and drive as I do and that has the money as well.

I always hire a professional roofing company with insurance and work comp and typically use 50 yr shingles and still never paid $20,000.Severity of repairs: Or urgency of repairs. 

Any facts relating to the urgency of the seller’s need to dispose of the property.?

File a request for urgency consideration, this should speed it up.

Not sure what it is in ABQ, but there does not seem to be any real sense of urgency. 

I felt the same way when I stumbled upon this sector - I was pretty excited reading about a lot of the success stories, and I felt a certain sense of urgency, almost like I was being left behind while everyone else was scooping up piles of cash! 

It seems like she may not have that urgency or motivation (not a motivated seller).