Letter review

[Jeff Hornberger]

Hi BP friends! I was hoping to get some criticism/advice/input on my letter I'm sending to high equity absentee's. A little background about myself. I've been a realtor for a bout 8 years since I graduated high school. First purchase was a duplex my wife and I lived in and now we are living in our second duplex. Over the years I have wholesaled a few properties I got under contract by chance and have flipped a handful of properties with family. My wife and I decided we want to start a RE investing business full time

and so we are starting various campaigns etc. My goal with this letter was to set myself up in a way that would allow for a chance to possibly list the home for sale as well as wholesale it. We sent out 2000 letters and have gotten close to 20 calls so far. I feel good about the calls but I'm not sure the letter is doing me favors in terms of wholesaling. The majority of calls I'm getting are from people looking to see who the buyer is and of course wondering what we're willing to pay. Was hoping to get some opinions on this letter. Before I send another 2000 I'm wondering if changing up the letter to say "I'm looking to buy" would that set me up better? Again I would like to list it for them if possible. Maybe I need a good script..... Any suggestion? Thanks in advance!!

[Roland Paicely]

Inserting your business card is a good idea since you are a Broker.  However, to cover your bases legally should you also state it in the letter!  Just a thought.