Spot on J. The clock is ticking and my primary source may not be able to fund in time. I've never looked for outside capital before (which is probably obvious from my original post) but I may need to give it a try. Yes I did work with your wife a while back and was quite impressed with you guys. Really top notch.
Dion: This is not a deal I'm going to go into much more detail in an open forum with a bunch of folks I don't know. Just not going to happen. This is not "pick a deal apart" hour at the local real estate meeting and is not academic. Contact me offline if sincerely interested and able to fund if it meets your criteria. Unless you are a principal or working directly with a principal we probably won't have time.
I generally let people run their own numbers for vacancy, repairs, and credit loss. All other expenses (water, trash, grounds, taxes, insurance) are already included. Say you were to decide 20% of gross rents was reasonable that leaves you with net net cash flow of just over $48,000.00/yr on $230,000.00 to cover the debt service. Seems like a good deal to me. How did you come up with 8.39%?