How Does It Look? NEW Postcard Marketing Piece

[Carson Sweezy]

Hey everyone,

I am getting ready to send out a new marketing campaign to absentee wholesale leads. Below is what our new postcard mailer looks like. We wanted to keep it simple, and to the point. Any thoughts, or criticisms are much appreciated!

-Carson

Front

Back

[Tim Alvarez]

I love the color choices and layout on the front. And I'm sure you want us to be brutally honest so here are my immediate concerns:

1. The "Need to Sell?" is a little vague at first glance. I don't know what I want to sell until I read further.

2. I would probably put an email address on the card.

3. The picture is good, but it just says "Me and Roxie." We don't know what your name is.

4. I don't think all the words need to be capitalized in your list. Definitely not "For" and "To."

It looks really good otherwise and obviously, you don't have to listen to me at all. The card definitely gets your point across and I'm sure it'll be successful. Good Luck!