I asked it to "rewrite this so that it is more marketable toward couples" and I copy/pasted in my current description/summary I have on Airbnb and VRBO. 

This is geographically important.

Nathan is correct, but a legal description does not contain what improvements are, the legal description is the meets and bounds or block/lot description of the land.

rip through the law parts which is the majority come back just skim the math.. and even if you don't want to read them just pick C  I never even looked at the math because I already new I passed.. and I like the legal description stuff because I love maps and section and range land etc.. that I liked.  

They were finally out at 4:30 pm.Now, (after that really long description) I want to know what to do next. 

@Diana Costta Not sure what the rental market is like in Cleveland- as for my rentals in Albany NY, I will post vacancies on Facebook marketplace, Realtor and Zillow with a short description of what the unit is like as far as beds/baths, if parking is included, if it is pet friendly or not and what i pay as the landlord such as water and what bills will be in the tenant's name such as electric.

I have had other organizations have programs where they had a bonus for a landlord who rented to a tenant in certain geographical areas. 

There are also online tools to get code violation records where you can even filter them by status, dates, location, description.

Does anyone know of a broker that fits this description?

Then I did the same on the second home that way I could give detail descriptions to the lender on what I wanted to do for the rehab; that way he also felt more confident what the money was exactly going to!