Thinking it might show an extra level of professionalism and result in more offers/money

As you can tell from the responses you need a professional to make this as smooth and uncomplicated as possible.

Since I’m also a hard working professional looking for that passive income cash flow from rentals just not sure where to start.

Also it never hurts to do a combination of handwritten and professional letters.

Also they'll run a static water test or scope the plumbing to make sure that the pipes didn't crack due to the movement of the house.  

My advice is to just get a professional over there to fix it and move on.

As with any RE professional that you include on your team...make sure that they are investors themselves!

An LLC is a pass through entity so unless you are advised by a professional differently, double taxation will not affect you. 

Second, consider joining a local real estate investment club in your area to network with other real estate investors and professionals locally.

Wendy is right - but there's a lot to consider when it come to fraud.There are several types of fraud - most have to do with intent and the actions taken prior to, during, and after the fraud takes place - and all can be argued one way or another.Pretty much every single purchase money loan has a due on sale clause - if you are maliciously trying to sell a property without paying off the loan, yes, that's Intentional Positive Fraud and you can get cracked on it pretty good.