Did you have a copywriter put that together?

Look at their locations, amenities, decor, images, copywriting, and most importantly, their calendars & daily rates.

@David Elefant,  The people you're mailing out to are probably used to getting a lot of bills, alerts, notices, etc. so make sure your copy (writing) can be easily seen apart from those mailings.Remember to "voice" yourself as a person rather than a faceless business entity.Hope this helps :)

For example, creating several different Craigslist buyer and seller ads to send to your landing pages, or finding a professional copywriter to critque and/or create your website content sales letters etc...Hiring a personal assistant seems like it would make more sense.

If you use my copywriting, there will certainly be a disconnect between what I write and how you converse with the seller.

Having studied marketing in my free time over the past few years, and working as a copywriter, I think this can contribute to success in this area.Thanks Again- I'll put this into action starting today!

Direct mail can be a good way to go if you're a good copy-writer, good "sales" person, and are patient enough to go through enough leads to find prospective properties.

Some advanced marketers even use audio and video on their squeeze page.Internet marketers borrow copywriting techniques from offline direct response marketing.

@Matthew Trotter I'm no expert copywriter so take this for what its worth...you can ditch the whole second paragraph.

Merrick - you are already in the top tier as mist people will never take any action, let alone mailing the volume that you are.Part of your challenge may be with your marketing strategy, part with your copywriting, part with your conversion and the remaining part with your profit strategy.