Is my services to complex to have an effective marketing message?

Have you ever seen this in the real world and do you think it could be effective? 

Highly unlikely he responds on the first go so you need to have a  plan to get the full effect

Personally the most effective bet is too call other local PM companies yourself because only you can truly express your concerns and maybe get better pricing.It should only take 15 mins per call.

Will this be effective retroactively?

The roof rafters are falling due to water damage.

Even as we get efficient and effective buying solo, getting it to our advantage with price reductions and concessions used to be very tough but should get easier with the new (about time) rules of buyers being responsible for getting their own agent paid.  

we have a realtor we like but curious how badly that effects our margins vs the expertise they bring on the market we are in. 

Or would it be more cost-effective to replace just SEER condenser and evaporator coil for the AC?

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