That being said, this can be as simple as a one sentence lease addendum that says "Tenant and owner/manager hereby agree to revise lease start date to ___/___/2017.

And, literally, every sentence uses either "I", "my", or similar. 

Title: do highlights instead of sentences. 

DO: Write complete sentences and paragraphs.

I've seen this as the first sentence for some agent owned property.All the best,Stephanie 

Accordingly, the next three sentences are just my layman's understanding, to be verified with a lawyer. 

@Stephen Anderson can you rewrite it or point out specific sentences I should change?

Try and spend a lot of time understanding her perspective and the potential happiness that her vision will bring, because when I read that sentence above, it doesn't sound all that bad to me. 

Also, Brandon Hall can you clarify the no specific hour requirement sentence below?

Just a couple of sentences on a piece of paper that you both sign that says "Both parties agree to remove the boyfriend from the lease and all other lease terms remain in place."