Content of my mass mailer letter

[Patrick Philip]

This is the current letter that I have.

"To (owners):

My name is Patrick Macchione. I am an investor wishing to purchase your house at (address).

I will buy your house in “as-is” condition and purchase in cash. I would like to buy your house as soon as possible.

Please get back to me if you wish to do business.

Sincerely,

(my name)

(my number)"

What do you think? That was my first draft. I would tweak this in any way that people say that I should. I am all ears. I am starting my first mailing campaign to 1,500 absentee owners very soon.