I can't emphasize enough how important it is to find a great deal.

I am adding this to emphasize why I feel it's important to see who else would be interested.

He emphasizes that the legal way to wholesale is by actually buying the property first - commonly called a "double close". 

  (2 x SFH in Midwest) I just want to highlight my experience on a property I own and emphasize the IMPORTANCE of doing your own due diligence on potential tenants. 

If it is out of state, you are almost always better off to get a good (and I emphasize good, I'm getting ready to fire my OOS PM) property manager because you need trustworthy boots on the ground to keep things running smoothly.

Would suggest emphasizing that she fell and wasn't found for _two days_. 

That is not to emphasize day one cash-flow, for us it's simply a function of being efficient and timely with how we operate.  

Get referrals for contractors who have experience working with investors by attending local REI meetings or calling Realtors who do a lot of flip transactions in your area.This is a great point, and I really want to emphasize this as well. 

love it. but if i had to fix something.. i would find ways to emphasize what the seller wants to here. put the words like "Cash" " as-is" in caps or bold. put a red circle around your number. create a scene of urgency like "my buyer is looking into buying a property in you neighborhood This month. or This week." and lastly.. have them come back to you if they are not selling like "if you're thinking about selling quickly ,.. or know someone who is.., give me a call" "call me to find out today why now is the best time to sell"i believe that the goal is to get them to call you "TODAY" then you can explain yourself, your business and close them when you give them good phone. but at-least they called you. so have their number.. you can follow up.oh and btw.. the spacing is perfect in the beginning of the letter yet the last few paragraphs are not on the line... its not hand written. if that's the look you are going for.These are just small stuff... like i said before, you're letter is looking great.As always, this is my opinion and i hope it helps. we are not in competition with each other but in collaboration with one another.

Just do what is average or better for that neighberhood.I went to college to, not that it is mandatory, and I got a business degree that emphasized real estate.