Overall, I like how you identify their potential pain point and offer a solution along with neighborhood-specific language. 

Also create some pain.

The neighborhood in which we purchased the SFH is undergoing a great deal of investment and development and is likely to continue to appreciate.

Corrections are a B*thch - wait this is a family website, Corrects are painful.

Sure the sale failed, that's a pain, but $50k windfall was pretty nice, no wear and tear like collecting rent anyway.

Hi All,I have a rental applicant whom I would like to place in one of my shared housing rentals.We strictly require all applicants to undergo a credit and background check.

I'm patient, and I know this is going to take over a year, but the cost of entry is painfully cheap, that's the only reason I'm considering this.

Basically I'm trying to examine if there are any inefficiencies/pains in the *** that can be automated away to save hassle and headache.

As I mentioned initially a lot of people on BP are anti-condo, so it simply means you'll have fewer fellow investors competing with you.HOAs can be a pain in the neck, and condo associations are more invasive.

My guess is that numbers will be irrelevant until she feels the pain.