Quote from @Raquel Brown:
Ones located in Greensboro Nc and the other is located in reidsville Nc
the fees I see on this soft quote are: origination fee, underwriting/processing fee, 3rd party closing costs, 6 month tax impound, 6 month insurance impound, looks like 11-12k in fees alone.
both homes are rented already for several months
It's not clear if this is one or two separate loans.
$4300 in origination fees on $283k is 1.5% for a commercial loan - sounds about right, maybe a bit high. 1% is mostly the norm. Also, this depends on the points.
UW/processing/lender fees are typically around $2k per loan (DSCR), give or take. This depends on the lender and what is charged in the orig fee. This includes the two appraisals at $500-$750 each.
Attorney costs are usually $1500-$2500/transaction, including lender's title policy and whether it's a new policy or a true refi. If this is 2 separate loans, then 2x this.
6 months of tax and insurance escrows per property are not really fees. These are costs you're going to pay regardless. My guess is 2 months' worth is to establish reserves, and the rest is prepaids on these. Depends on when your tax and insurance bills are paid. Whether you escrow now or pay out of pocket later, the net costs to you are largely the same. Not much wiggle room here, other than asking to not escrow (this will likely cost you).
Your FICO is below 680, so it wouldnt surprise if you're also buying down the rate with points. I would dig through your docs to see what you're paying in points. Given the Fico on this deal, this is probably the biggest lever you can pull to reduce the total costs.