Absentee Owner Letter - Please Critique

[Will Hoyle]

I plan on dropping 1000 yellow letters to a Absentee Owner list I am going to create. Please let me know what you think about my message for yellow letter and what I could possibly take away or add to it.

Dear John,

My name is Will Hoyle and

I would like to

$Buy$

Your house at 123 main st

If you are tired of dealing with late paying tenants or constantly repairing that leaky toilet then give me a call at [REMOVED]

I buy cash and can close in a week so you don't have to deal with tenants anymore.

If you are interested in an cash offer, please call me at [REMOVED]


Respectively,
Will Hoyle

Thanks For your input.

Will

[Michael Quarles]

Before you say I am crazy think about something like: