Direct Mail Marketing Letter

[Thomas Garza]

My wife and I are about to start our first direct mail marketing campaign after many years of thinking about doing it. I would love your feedback on my template below. This letter will be sent exclusively to driving for dollar houses. The plan is to pay someone around $1 to write each letter by hand (I can write around 15 per hour) and they will be mailed traditional mail. Thanks for any input you are able to provide. 

Dear [Person Name]

My wife and I were driving through your neighborhood a few days ago when we spotted your house at [Street Address]. We are in the market for a new investment property, and we think your house might be exactly what we are looking for.

If you are interested in selling us your house, without the need to make expensive repairs or updates, please give us a call at [Google Voice Number].

Sincerely,

Thomas and Dianna