Script for Youtube Video for my Website

[Will Hoyle]

I am having someone take a professional video of what solutions I have to offer to sellers that are in distress and im going to upload to youtube. Here is the script I am going to use for my video. Please critique and see what I might need to add or take out.

Thanks!

Hi my name is William Hoyle with [REMOVED]. I am a professional home buyer here in San Antonio Texas. We buy 3 to 4 houses a month here in the San Antonio area. We provide solutions to homeowners that need to sell their home quick. We buy in any condition all over San Antonio. Are you behind on payments? What is your situation? We will give you a no obligation fair cash offer today! Give me a call now at [REMOVED] or you can fill out the form on the right to give us some contact information to see how we can best help you.

Thank you very much