Yellow letter critique for Absentee Owners?

[Benjamin Blackburn]

Good morning everyone,

I'm wondering what your thoughts are on my yellow letter?  I'll be printing them out and everything from home.  If it's horrible please feel free to let me know... I have very think skin and can take constructive criticism.

Thanks a lot!

Have a great Sunday.

[Jay Hinrichs]

@Benjamin Blackburn  if your in a market that is well sought after remember your target is going to get many of these same color same red print etc.. does not even take the dullest bulb to realize these are all canned.

I often wonder if you did something like

Very professional.... and you explain to them that they will probably get a bunch of letters like this... Have a copy of one of those... and then set out to tell them why your different.

sell off of the other letters.. not just joining the pack.

now if your in an area with a lot of low value assets and boarded homes probably does not matter  depends on your target I guess..   IE what class of property your after.

Also when I am targeting in fill how I set myself apart is to have a soft pre qual with my letter so they know I am not fooling around.. and I state in my letter if you get other inquires if they cannot prove in 24 hours that they have the cash in the bank  why would you want to work with them.. they are just trying to tie up your property and flip it..  That's what I do.

I use the no money wholesale guys as targets, and explain to the seller why they should use me and not waste their time with someone who is just trying to flip there home.