My direct mail post card. Looking for input.

[Keith Belzner]

Hi BP I am looking for input, advice and yes criticism of it. I know they say not to re-invent the wheel but when everybody and there brother are doing yellow letters that are basically the same I wanted to try a different approach. They will be sent to not only AO's but used as a general mailing in my areas of interest. My thought is planting the idea of selling without coming across as to aggressive.