Critique my yellow letter message to NOD's

[Benjamin Ficker]

Hey,

I have written a series of 8 yellow letters to send out to NODs in my area. My plan is to send them out once a week for the next 8 weeks, and then refreshing my mail list.

The letter content was taken from a few different members who posted examples on here and on their websites.

Yellow Letter 1

Dear John,

My name is Benjamin, and my partners and I are looking to buy homes in your area. Your home at 123 E Main St caught our attention.

If you are interested in selling, please call me at 503-468-5137

I can act quickly, and will the buy the house “as-is”

Please call anytime

Respectfully,

Benjamin

503-468-5137

P.S. I am wanting to buy soon, so please call.

Yellow Letter 2

Dear John,

My name is Benjamin, and I sent you a similar letter a week ago. Your home at 123 E Main street is a home that we would like to make a cash offer on. Any interest?

If you are interested in selling, please call me at 503-468-5137

I can act quickly, and will the buy the house “as-is” with CASH.

Please call anytime

Yellow Letter 3

Dear John,

I am trying to follow up on the couple of letters I have sent.

I saw your house at 123 E Main St and I am wondering if you would like to get out from underneath it.

If you are interested in selling, please call me at 503-468-5137

I can act quickly, and will the buy the house “as-is”

Please call anytime

Yellow Letter 4

Dear John,

I noticed that your home at 123 E Main St. was served with a Notice of Default.

I would like to help you out of this situation.

Please call anytime

Respectfully,

Benjamin

503-468-5137

Yellow Letter 5

Dear John,

I have a cash offer ready to be made on your home at 123 E Main St.

You can avoid foreclosure and possibly make some money out of this.

We can close for cash and close quick.

Please call anytime

Yellow Letter 6

Dear John,

Do you have a plan for your home at 123 E Main St?

My partners and I are very interested in this property.

We can close for cash and close quick.

Please call anytime

Yellow Letter 7

Hi John,

If you have missed a mortgage payment, you are not alone. There are hundreds and thousands of property owners in the area that are in the same boat as you.

You still have options. Even if you are underwater, you may be able to get some money buy selling us your home.

We can close for cash and close quick.

Please call anytime

Yellow Letter 8

Hi John,

I still want to buy your home at 123 E Main St.

Unfortunately I can not keep sending letters if you are not interested. Please give me a call at 503-468-5137 either way.

We can close for cash and close quick.