Feedback on Business Pitch Deck

[Jonathan Orr]

Hi BP, I have been toying with a simple pitch deck for a new company I am starting. The business will focus on entitlement and development of commercial properties in the Western US.  The main part of this Pitch Deck is to provide a synopsis of the company and what we intend to accomplish.  Additionally it will be a tool used to present to potential investors/partners for raising capital.  This is not property specific, but rather intended to present to investors describing what we do and will have follow up pitch decks on specific deals.  Would love constructive thoughts on what to add or delete or potential changes, link is below to the pitch deck.  I appreciate all of your help and hope everyone is staying safe during this treacherous time

https://docs.google.com/presen...