Wix Website For Patriot Home Buyers, Fayetteville, NC

[Kerry Smith]

I've been working on a simple squeeze page for our business. We do not currently have a direct marketing campaign in place, but we are planning to use this website for lead capture in the future. 

I'd like to garner some feedback on the site from other BP members. I used the guide @Brandon Turner put together located HERE. Awesome guide Brandon!

Tear it apart - What am I missing that other lead capture sites have?

Here is the site:
http://www.patriothomebuyers.com/

[Todd Heitner]

Kerry,

Nice job with your site!  It looks really good.

I only have a few minor suggestions.

1) On the Contact page, above the contact form, you tell people what information you want them to include.  I don't use Wix so I'm not sure if this is possible, but if so, I think it would be better if the contact forms actually asked the questions you want answers to.  Otherwise people will likely forget to answer all of those questions.  Having them on the form doesn't guarantee people will answer them, but it helps.

2)  On your About Us page, there is a picture of an elderly couple.  People generally expect if there is a photo on that page that it's a photo of you.  I don't think that's the case because in your BP profile picture you look much younger.  I think that you probably put the picture there to imply that you help people like ones in the photo.  However, I think people may mistakenly think that's you because it's an "About Us" page.  So I think a nice photo of you might be better.  People do like to know who they're doing business with.  Having a face to associate with the business can put people at ease.

3)  I don't know how much control Wix gives you over page titles (what shows up in the browser/tab title area), but right now all your page titles start off with "patriot-home-buyers".  If it's possible to change that, I'd suggest it for SEO purposes.  You want to include some words/terms people might be searching for.  You can include your city/area name to help people locally to find you as well.  For example, "Sell Your Fayetteville, NC House" or "We Buy Fayetteville, North Carolina Homes".  Don't try to stuff too may words in each page's title, but just one phrase is best.

That's all that stood out to me as I looked over it.  Overall it's really good.  Those issues are relatively minor, nothing that should prevent you from starting marketing, but just things to consider.

I hope this helps!

Thanks,
Todd