Deck Slides - MF Business Plan

[Jared Carpenter]

Hi,

I am putting together a deck to put in front of potential investors. Pretty typical deck that will describe desired markets and bios, however I would like to include a business plan slide that will describe line by line what type of deals I will transact on and what the execution is. 

Is this standard for decks, and what tolerance do you or potential investors have for such a slide?

Please see below for an example and feel free to provide feedback.

Thanks.