Direct Mail Marketing: Feedback on my campaign please!

[Collin Schwartz]

I am beginning a direct mail campaign and will target absentee owners both in state and out of state (non corporate or trust owned). I have limited to 4 zip codes for multi family only. My final criteria is the property must have been owned for over five years. My list is small and consists of about 350 addresses.

I am taking the following approach:

-Hand written addressed envelope (blue pen). Return address is local address.

-Typed letter:

"Hello _______

My name is Collin Schwartz and I would like to purchase your property at ___________. I will pay fair market value for your property and will provide an offer within a week. 

I am not a real estate agent nor am I represented by an agent.

Please contact me either by email or cell phone.

Thanks and have a great day!

Contact Info_____"

-Half the mailings will include a business card.

Does this seem to be appropriate? I am marketing properties in the midwest. I am also considering hand writing the letters as well for the first mailing.

Any suggestions would be great!