1st website is about to hit the waves soon!!

[Jason M Pagan]

Hello ALL, 

So I am hoping to finish my first website for my wholesaling business in the next couple days and send out my first DM MKTing campaign next Saturday to follow it up. The site will be very basic and generic. Mostly for collecting information/data generating from my Yellow letters/post cards to start. 

Without going into great detail, this POST is with regards to an -ABOUT US- page I have made. I want to keep it brief and simple. I am not licensed but I will work with people who are and cross paths with others, but I will mention something along the lines of: my name and partners are REI who will receive offers and close in 30 days... What do you guys think... should I adjust/expand?? I just am not sure how much into the process of wholesaling you truly want to explain, instead, let them make contact with you and explain the process... correct??

I have links from my Home Page leading to a Sell page(very basic and quick form for owner and low pressure property questions) and Contact page if they have question or concerns to explain more. 

I also have a survey question at the bottom of every page regarding what led them to the site. My number is at the bottom of every page as well, and I made it an emphasis to make every page feel welcoming to reassure the seller as if I were in their shoes during this process. 

LMK if any comments about the ABOUT US page or anything else, as I mentioned, its very basic, but welcoming, peaceful, easy and thanking the seller every chance I can for every click. 

THANKS!