Guy's can I please get some feed back from the community

[Cody May]

So I been debating rather or not to give this letter to a former landlord I rented from! I'm trying to figure out how to go about pretty much asking him to be a mentor, but I find my self struggling with it not knowing what to say. What do you guys think::

Hey Mike. I rented from you I think it was late 2012 early 2013 in your 4plex on elm St. in Wabash. My name is Cody I rented a unit with Sarah until I moved out. I recall you telling me you owned 21 properties throughout Wabash at the time. At the time I had no thoughts at all about getting into Real Estate Investing. Here lately I have been thinking HIGHLY about getting into Real Estate Investing in the Kokomo area. I’ve been listening to ton’s on podcast, blogs, and forums Etc.. I was wondering if I could do a Free part time intern ship with you on the weekends. For a couple months or so. I’m willing to do any physical labor help you clean up a property help rehab whatever dealing with real estate. I’m just trying to get a little bit of hands on experience before I start to purchase some property’s. I would like to just get a little more insight from someone who Is actually in the real estate industry, and that’s been in it for along time. If you find yourself really busy, and just really not wanting to I completely understand. No hurt feeling here. I just thought I would ask. If Interested just give me a call when you can or just shoot me a text whenever.

Of course i added our last names so he can maybe recall who I am just didn't add here for privacy reason's I guess. And also added my phone number of course at the end of the letter. ANY feedback is very much appreciated. Please give your honest opinions if you think its a dumb idea please let me no. Thanks BP!