Can you help me build my mission statement?

[Brent Fisher]

My wife and I have begun to build our business plan after reading UBG-BP and the e-myth REI. I've read quite a few fellow mission statements from the BP community. We're building the business mission statement. Here is my draft. I'd love to hear some thoughts from you experts out there.

Fisher Group Properties exists to create wealth for its owners, partners and associates through real estate. We build a business environment with vitality through enjoyable business processes that we define, refine and then scale. We seek the worst properties in the best, and up and coming parts of Utah and make them home. We build our business to enrich our lives, open our minds to life's possibilities and enable us to live limitless.

Thoughts?

If you share your thoughts with me, I promise to share mine with you!

[Brent Fisher]

@Charlie MacPherson, I like your mission statement.  Perhaps the last few sentences are too guru-speak.  I do want to say something that tells you that we aren't looking to just create another job, but, rather begin to create true wealth through continuously defined business processes, systems and people.

Maybe I'll say just that.

I've been reading The e-myth.  So many recommendations for it from here.  To me, I can't see how I'd want to build a cluster of just more work that I can't get to work for itself when I go on vacation.

But, I'm definitely wanting to reduce it down to something someone would want to read!

@Account Closed, it seems you are right.  I look at it, and although I agree with it, even I feel tired when I think about reading it.  

So, how about....  actually, I can't see any reason to add anything more than Spencer wrote.  So, thanks Spencer!

Kind Regards,

Brent