When I helped develop an internal software system for a financial institution we tested all of our loan calculations against TValue and a good ole HP12C.

We are looking to build relationships with financial institutions who lend to LLC’s as well as grow by using this forum.

Any good realtor should feel obligated to be very clear about what is in the contract.

If they say these are an extra financial  burden then they are already in poor financial strength and I don't want them as a tenant.

The first sign of trouble here is section 8, which tells me the individual is not financially responsible.

Specifically, I was wanting to strike through the part of Clause 5 where it says Note: Buyer's obligations under this contract are not conditional upon obtaining or closing any loan.  

My Goal is obtaining financial freedom by purchasing rental properties and using the BRRR strategy.

So if you're investing in multiple deals, you'll need to gain some understanding of the markets, review sponsor track records, verify their financials projections make sense and that they're using reasonable assumptions, make sure the fees aren't excessive (fees vary for each deal).

Going forward include a paragraph detailing your obligation as well as theirs. 

You need to research your market.From a financial perspective your monthly rent should be equilivant to 1% of the value of the home as a bare minimum.