I'm just posting to comment on what great feedback you got.  

Hello form,I have a line of thought that I was wondering if I could get feedback on.

Fill in the foundation below.Check out the Start Here page http://www.biggerpockets.com/starthereLocate and attend 3 different local REIA club meetings great place to meet people gather resources and info.

You may want to see if you can find someone (not a friend--they want to make you happy, and you need someone who will be upfront with you instead of telling you what you want to hear)  who would be willing to "role play' with you and give you honest feedback on what might be going on. 

And you get the benefit of having over 100 past ones to catch up on.Locate and attend 3 different local REIA club meetings great place to meet people gather resources and info.

And you get the benefit of having over 100 past ones to catch up on.Locate and attend 3 different local REIA club meetings great place to meet people gather resources and info.

Let me know what other info I need to give out to get good feedback please!

I gather from your website name that you do direct marketing and I'm interested in finding some off market deals.

I would gather the data for residential sales, pending sales and homes on the market for sale.

So definitely gather a knowledgeable team around you to help you.