It has a good thorough description, date available, lots of good pictures and other things that let the viewer get a good idea if this is what they are looking for.  

I was pleased with the amount of pictures you had and how comprehensive the description of the property was.

Depending on what you are trying to structure you need certain info from the seller - address, email, phone, property description, condition, what the seller thinks the property is worth, what they want, what they owe, payment, etc. 

I too am in agreement that this seller is asking too high of a price, based on the description you gave and the limited info we have.

@Spencer McCainSomething in your description is not adding up.  

This evening I will be send out our newsletter with brief descriptions of real estate investment offers we have.

Many states restrict rent increase and Calif is 10%.However, new owner and or new tenant is an opportunity to level the playing field.Your description says you have a nice turnkey rental - - imo, be kind and keep your tenants happy. 

the numbers are great no doubt - I was just wondering about the legal status of the key money and what that entitled the "renter" to get - if it isnt rented to him on the terms he paid the key money to it seems he would be entitled to get it all back. perhaps I misunderstood but the first description sounded like the key money was applied to the rent.thanks for the feedback!

Before I posted the description I researched my market for price and keywords.  

And, based on your description, it sounds like your financial strength is going to limit your ability to borrow.