And it causes me great difficulty to make my payment to my bank on the loan that I have on the house.

Development has a lot of moving parts and you missing one step can cause a very costly lesson.

Not every one needs fixed right away but there are a few that are causing water to get in.

is it only the upper tenant that's causing trouble?

.) - what do you folks do when Smartmove "approves" the tenant, but other factors cause you to reject them? 

Neither I or the Lender are the cause of the delay.

I don't suggest you do this at all cause it could get you in trouble but if this happened to me and they haven't moved in yet I would be on my way to that house right now to change the locks.

Since your putting this in an LLC, you can't get a conforming mortgage, you will have to use a commercial loan.If you want to go the conforming mortgage route, you can't loan the money (like a hard money loan) to yourself, but a brother, cousin, etc, that doesn't live with you can (I've done it before),, you have the title company draw up a loan with the closing paperwork.When you finish with the rehab you go to 'refinance' your mortgage with a traditional lender, not a  problem (or at least I haven't had one).My mother was getting 1% on savings, and I was paying 14% interest to a hard money lender, which made no sense, so we started doing it this way, she got 6% interest, and I felt like I was helping her out,,everyone won.Don't have a spouse loan you the money, keep it someone that doesn't live with you (I know someone that did that and it caused some issues)

The tenants in MHs, especially park owned home renters are lower tier, and are likely to cause damages to the mobiles, especially since they do not own them.  

Might be a lost cause, but I would love to hear if there is some way to actually go after that money.