So the fact that your offer was rejected suggests you are doing things right.Before making an offer though (even a text message one), I would recommend running through the numbers in more detail over using a __% rule.  

In addition to the forums, blogs and private messaging system, members will be able to jump in on a live chat with their colleagues.We know this will help you better engage with current and new connections and look forward to the impending launch!

I'd like to be responsible for creating better places for people to live and generally enhance my hometown.

I'll connect with you to get that info please (or you can share it here), and I'll message you some recommended professionals to work with. 

Please reply or message me on here.Thanks,Mark

Feel free to message if you ever have any questions.  

Thanks for the message, @Alfonso Velazquez .  

Message me if you are interested in connecting further!

If that's the area you interested in, you should message him.

structure for investors.Feel free to send me a private message (and anyone reading this is welcome to do so as well), as I would be happy to schedule call to help any way that I can.