Your first sentence...stating someone is an"agent"?

If you approach someone you want to work with, and you know the lingo and can follow the conversation of real estate then you will be taken more seriously with every sentence.  

Account Closed Yep, I addressed that in the last sentence. " They will be responsible for paying the rent and utilities until it is re-leased.

What are a few sentences that can begin to be used to attract investors and people I already know? 

On Craigslist, I could add enough html so that there would be blank lines between sentences and bullet points.But, even though I transferred over the Craigslist code to Zillow, the Zillow description is just 1 big blob of unreadable text. 

All I know it was Criminal Sexual Conduct - Second Degree (person under 13) offense and he was sentenced to jail for one year in 2006.

You mentioned the guy had saved some money, now that might be an issue in a short sale, the bank will want some of that, so in order to keep his cash he may need to trade that off with his credit dinged for 3 years, if he changes his ways he can put that behind him, it's not a life sentence and the lesson learned might be a good start in being a better provider for those kids!

I use one that's only 4-5 sentences long.

As he was finishing his sentence about the 30 day minimum I chimed in with a "the hotels are getting pissed off" followed by walking up and introducing myself.

To put it in one sentence: would you rather get paid once for doing work, or every month for the rest of your life?