Instead of letting an unsuccessful attempt keep them from financial freedom, however, they boldly used what they had – their 401k – to get what they needed – a double wide on land – to get what they wanted – passive income that pays them when they retire.Mom and Dad, your persistence, cleverness and bravery is inspirational.

For developers it's different flavors of ice cream that suits their taste.

The way that page is set up is probably just something that your FIL isn't used to seeing.With that said, I would change your bold text on the first What We Do page to make it more direct.

They know they must act boldly, but this doesn’t mean saying yes to anything and everything that comes down the pike.

My answers in bold and caps above, to distinguish from the original questions.

I recommend you attend one of their weekend bootcamps to get a flavor of their content and style.

(Sorry for the bold type, it won't deselect bold for some reason)

The language in bold in your post is fairly common in leases.

Root cause of the issue is a totally unacceptable contract.Illegal comes in three flavors:  Criminal, Misdemeanor and State/Local Regulations. 

They will be some flavor of Vantage scores.