This is always important and while rates and fees are important, things like closing on time, having the money available, appraising the property correctly, what their maximum "Loan to Value" is, are all going to be CRITICAL to the success of your transaction. 

Milwaukee also has become hip for a young crowd, who enjoy the quality of living, economic opportunities and an entrepreneurial vibe combined with a relativley low cost of living.As mentioned before choice of area is critical.

I tried using rentometer and craigslist and i am guessing the rental amount. constructive criticism is much appreciated and your rationale.

A handyman is a critical player in your RE team .

So that is the beginning of my story, any constructive criticism and/or suggestions on the next step would be greatly appreciated.

I need criticism, criticism, criticism….and some suggestionsJThanks so muchRichard

Some of them have become SO immune to criticism they feel justified in sending out some ridiculous email like the one you received. 

All of these items are critically important, and very few agents and salespeople from the well-known big national companies have the expertise and knowledge to provide good advice.

You also seem to have fudged the expenses to make it look good.  8% vs 10% PM, plus you left out 2 of the most critical expenses to account for, Vacancy (8.34%) and CapEx (10%).  

These claims are designed to build authority and get you to listen to them, instead of thinking critically.