Although, in view of the fact that your title companies have been hesitant to work with a non-lawyer, I would rephrase that sentence to, “If you get either the mortgage note, or widow's deed, then tell your title company you will want to buy title insurance.

Your last sentence "Learn, take action, refine action, scale" is great.

Hi Patrick, I'm a marketing copywriter and would suggest leaving off the last three sentences, only addressing those particular concerns on a case-by-case basis.

Now, Emails are like texts these days so he should at least replied you with one-sentence email.  

You only posted a half structured, jumbled sentence about foreclosures, reo's and shortsales.

Nothing you wrote is accurate other than your first sentence, that being that yes, you can sell a home before the foreclosure auction.

A number of highly publicized convictions and resulting prison sentences for mortgage fraud greatly reduced this methodology.A private lender may take your “automatic” equity into consideration , but you’ll pay A LOT higher interest rate.

In the last sentence do you mean that I would for example charge them each $50 for electric and that if the total bill for electric is less than what they paid me in total, then that's where you mean I have some profit?

"But my lender said you wouldn't check" isn't going to hold any water when they're sentencing you to jail. 

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