@Marcella Brown
You might need to add some details to this thread so we can understand what you're trying to do. After the refinance, it looks like you have negative cash-flow. Some investors might do that in a market where they anticipate a ton of appreciation. In the current market, I would say that is probably risky.
A couple other questions...
1) $500 in loan origination fees on $189,000 loan seems low to me. Also, if you can get 3.5% on a loan for a rental property, that is amazing. If it is owner occupied, that is probably possible. As a rental property (non-owner occupied), the interest rate will probably be higher.
2) Also a $5000 renovation to create $70,000 in value on the ARV seems unrealistic to me unless you are purchasing the property way under market value for some reason.
That's just a few points I can get from taking a quick look at the analysis. Maybe some others will add their insight. If you explain some of what you're trying to do, that might help as well.
Mike