Hey guys,
I would like to chime in if it's ok. I've been a direct response copywriter for going on 10 years and there are a few things that I have learned over the years that have consistently worked. No matter if I was working on a direct mail campaign, a email sequence, or building a multi-media sales funnel it all came down to a few basic rules:
Your headline on your postcard, door hanger or any other marketing piece is going to be THE #1 most important thing.
Your headline is "your ad for your ad" if that makes sense. If you want them to read your letter/postcard/marketing peice the headline must first "speak to them". Too many post cards/direct mail letters etc get thrown out is because most marketers do not understand the "A/B pile rule"
The "A/B pile" is essentially when people stand in front of their trash can going through their mail trying to decide which pieces they will open/keep and which are getting tossed. "Pile A" is possibly the desk or a counter, and the "B pile" is the one that headed straight for the bin.
If you do not concisely focus on writing a RESULT/ BENEFIT driven headline, your chances on them reading even the first sentence diminishes. Now, with that said, the entire point of writing a great headline is for your targeted reader to move on and read the rest of your ad!
I think that a common mistake is being too generic. Not being upfront and straight to the point. Remember this, people are constantly being bombarded with different marketing and advertising messages, so to cut through the noise you MUST learn to differentiate yourself. QUICKLY.
When creating a marketing piece stick to these couple of points and you should see a pretty decent increase in the rate of response.
1) Write a good headline (write 10 before picking one!)
2) Use benefit driven bullet points (people want to know "Whats in it for me?)
3) Give them a REASON to want to communicate with you. (Create a USP/unique selling proposition)
4)ALWAYS, ALWAYS, ALWAYS, have a clear "Call To Action" Meaning be very clear on what specifically you want your reader to do next (I.E. visit your site ....or call a free 24 hour recorded message etc...you get the point)
Essentially you want them to know that you are a smart business person who is able to add value to their lives.
If you follow this very basic outline, you should see an increase in your response rate.
Hope this helps!
-LG