HI I've done short term for 6 year in Orlando through Airbnb and have been superhost for most of the time, hopefully my feedback can help:
The look it's pretty nice so overall it a nice place to say. Some improvements that i would add
1_3rd picture should be the first, it helps see from inside out
2_ describe what people see in each picture
3_ Dress the table so people can imagine having dinner or beaksfast. no need for food but help people picture themselves in each picture
4_Replace the table for a bigger one
5_Get profesional photos , you can also add pictures at night next to the pool
6_ a Great description is key: describe what you have in the house,this is a bit poor at the moment. size of the bed, size of the TV, cable system, internet, fully kitchen, games. Is it prepare for kids? crab or something else is available?
check descriptions from super host and COPY :) and remember, people don't read, they are lazy so have to make this a but straight and not too long. feel free to contact me for any help,