Could someone critique this Message?

[Noah McPherson]

Sent to real estate agents: 
"Nice to meet you_____. My name is _____. I'm an investor from _____. Currently, I'm searching for houses that are in need of a lot of rehab and typically wouldn't be posted on the MLS. If you have any houses like this, let me know. I'd love to help get them off your clients hands and assist you in selling them."

Would appreciate any critiques or any additional value I could add to this message. Thanks guys