Critique my Voicemail

[Frank Geneski]

I know that voicemail is not really an important part of the wholesaling business and I usually pick up every call that I get. But when I am unable, I like to sound as professional as possible and have come up with a quick scrip. I'd like you guys to let me know what you think.

Hi, you have reached Durham House Buyers . com. We answer the phone from 9AM – 9PM Monday through Saturday. If you are receiving this message, we are either assisting a client on the other line or out of the office providing a cash offer. You can visit our website at www Durham House Buyers . com for more information or leave us your name, number and a brief message and we will get back to to you as soon as possible. We appreciate your patience, thank you for calling Durham House Buyers . com and have a great day.

Trying to fine tune it before I launch my website. Thanks in advance.

[Andrea M.]

Frank Geneski I think it's very wordy, see my revision below :

Thank you for calling Durham House Buyers, you have reached the voicemail of (enter name ). Our business hours are 9am-9pm Monday thru Saturday.
Currently, we are assisting another client, please leave your name, phone number and the best time to return your call, all calls are returned within (enter time frame here). If you are internet friendly, feel free to visit our website at (enter website info ) . Thank you for calling Durham House Buyers we look forward to speaking with you. Have a great day!

Side Note: If the phone number is a cell phone and you may want to include a text option example: for a quicker response please send a brief text