Wholesale Direct Mail Marketing Letter

[Daniel Johnston]

Can anybody give me some critiques on this wholesale direct mail marketing letter? Any major pieces I am missing?

I am planning on sending this one to absentee owners and then maybe a different one to a divorce list. Purchasing a list on list source today and want to get mailing!

Dear <<Name>>,

I am looking to purchase a home in the <<Area>> area, and your home at <<123 Main Street>> caught my eye. I am a real estate investor and can purchase your home in As-is condition, for cash and close on your time frame.

Please give me a call at xxx-xxxx, I would love to learn more about your home even if you are not ready to sell quite yet.

Thanks,

Daniel Johnston