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Updated over 9 years ago,

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James Green
  • Wholesaler
  • Waldorf, MD
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Advice to tweaking my DM copy - Add my website or not?

James Green
  • Wholesaler
  • Waldorf, MD
Posted

I'm tweaking the copy of my next direct mail campaign and I'm wondering if I should add my website on the postcard.

Here is my copy without the postcard:

*****************************************************

I noticed you own the property at {house address} in {city}. I

am a local investor and would like to provide you with an unconditional

premium offer on your property.

It is critical for us to stress that there is never any commitment when you call

us. Even, if you are just simply curious. We buy As Is, Where is, Any

Condition, and have the ability to close on your time-table without any

stress!!

Interested? Please give me a call at 240-412-2372 to find out more. We

are prepared to buy your property for cash and at no out of pocket cost to

you what so ever.

Even if you are not interested in selling at this time, call 240-412-2372, so I

can help you determine the value of your property.

Sincerely,

James Green III

**************************************************************

I just noticed that I didn't say "Hi {first name}".

All suggestions welcome, especially what has worked for you.

Thanks

James

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