Critique my script to sellers

[Alexxa C.]

Initially we will talk about the property/their situation then I will say the below. I don't want to waste my time with sellers who do not agree with my process. Tell me what you think.

My husband and I purchase homes all over Missouri. Some of the homes we turn into rentals, some we rehab and resale, and others we pass along to business partners. I will need about 30-60 days max to due my due diligence on the property, but it usually takes two weeks to close. This also means I’ll need access to the property. Normally we put a lock box on the door. Will that be ok?

Lets set up a time to meet so I can see the property.