Direct Mail For Wholesale

[Nickolas Werth]

Hey all, 

I am currently working on direct mail for wholesaling and I am currently not getting the greatest return percentage on either my website or my mailers. I'm still getting the verbiage in the mailers down and I was curious if anyone would be willing to give me their opinions on how they are worded and the call to action along with other things that are a part of the mailer.

I am currently doing a handwritten frontage with the inside being a printed page that has a call to action and where to find me. I have also redone the inside of the envelopes to be more customized based on who I a mailing. I have sent about 300 and have received about 10 calls. Any help with this would be greatly appreciated! Thank you so much.