Post Card Design - Looking for feeback

[Mark Perry]

I'm starting a new mail campaign and created a new postcard.  I'd appreciate the groups feedback.  My objective was to have something that was short and to the point.  Something that could be read before the recipient makes it to the trash can.  Also wanted to leave them wanting more information to hopefully entice them to call to find out more.  Last campaign I used a pre-made template but think it was way too wordy.  If I were the recipient I would have likely tossed it before I had a chance to read it.  Let me know what you think and how I could improve it.  Thanks.