Business Card Design - Opinions?

[Andy Bankston]

I've been trying to make a business card most of the day. Here is what I've come up with. The uploaded quality isn't the greatest, but you get the idea. Please feel free to give your opinion/feedback before I have them printed. I added 0.25'' to the width and height to accommodate for the bleed, then placed all text and logos inside a 0.25'' margin on all four edges for safety zone, so the printed card will extend further towards the edges.
Thanks!

[Michael Quarles]

It's a great corporate card however as for an advertising card it doesn't tell the seller what you do.

You have seconds to answer their question and pick you.