Critique My Mailing (Pics Inside)

[James Ritter]

Hey Guys,

So I am going to be starting my first even direct mail. I decided to take some big steps so I created my own yellow letter (was not easy) in order to save some cashola at least until the first deal hits my desk. I will then be using yellowletters.com if not just for the convenience but for everything I learned from Michael reading his posts for which I am very thankful.

 I am VERY pleased with how the yellow letter came out but I wanted to upload pics here anyway and see if anybody had any suggestions to make them even better.

I am sending out 2300 mailers the first month (600 a week) and am hoping to land 2 wholesale deals. I plan to then use the proceeds from those deals to start buying, rehabbing, and holding.  Here is all the criteria Copy and pasted from listsource

PROPERTY	Total Assessed Value $200,001-$300,000 $100,001-$200,000 $50,001-$100,000 $1-$50,000 Property Type Residential: SFR Equity(%) 71 to 80 % 81 to 90 % 91 to 100 % 61 to 70 % Bedrooms 1-4 Last Market Sale Date 02/12/1900-02/12/2009
OPTIONS	OWNER-OCCUPIED Absentee Owned In-State Absentee Owned Out-of-State ALL STATES TRUSTEE-OWNED Exclude ADDRESS-COMPLETENESS Mailing and Property address Complete CORPORATE-OWNED Exclude

I will be updating everybody as to when the mailers go out and success rates. All in all the entire campaign after all is said and done will cost me about $2300