Video: Burn It Down & Start Over?

[Casey Mericle]

With a lot of help, I put together a video to show investors who I am, and what I do. This video is lengthier because it's not an intro.  It's more of a story for those who already have met me. 

I don't know whether to burn it down and start over, or if I'm headed in the right direction.  Any feedback would be a tremendous help!  You have my permission to be brutally honest.  Please let me know how I can make this better?

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P.S.  I cringe hearing the sound of my voice