Critique my first analysis - looking for feedback to improve

[Brian Seggebruch]

Hey everyone, not sure if this will work properly, but I just analyzed a deal with the BRRR calculator and I want everyone's feedback. I'm going with: no this isn't a good deal, but I'd love to hear what others think. Please look at my estimates and tell me what I did wrong and where I can improve. I used the list price as the purchase price because right now I'm using this as practice.

You should be able to find the report here.

Thanks in advance

-Brian