Looking to you and alot of money.

[Isaac Jones]

Hi everyone my name is Isaac. Im a wise, intelligent, honest, and hard working beginning investor. Im 100% sure real estate investing is what i want to do for the rest of my life and so don't hesitate to message me [edited].

[Percy N.]

I would start by stating the type of experience you have, things you can do for the investor and in essence what value you bring to the table.

At the moment your "ad" reads like it has nothing but liability for the investor.